In class-writing May1

  1. Reality shows are some of the best shows on television because it not only stimulates people’s commitment to real life events but also provide the audience with a sense of company.

  2. A successful marriage requires a lot of real virtues, including patience of long term relationship, good communication to overcome issues between each other, and a sense of humor to keep each other out of boringness.

  3. At USF there have been too many budget cuts in food service at this university, which arouse students’ discomfort of having meals in the cafeteria; therefore, students refuse to pay for the meal plan and the fund of this university is curtailed.

  4. Community volunteer work will help you make more friends and improve your communication skills. It not only makes you happy because you help other people for a good reason but also you get more friends while working in this community.
  5. Even though I didn’t make the Olympic ski team, my years of training taught me important skills, such as discipline, time management to focus my energy entirely on the competitions, and persistence, which inspires me to overcome everything by keeping working hard.

 

Free writing for essay4 in the essay4 I want to write more about women right. Put some example for the fight for women right.

April 28 in-class writing

  1. I think when I was working on essay 4, I realized that the more you write, the better you get at writing. It’s as simple as that. Sometimes the best way to improve yourself in an area is just to keep trying. Good writing skills are benefits in every area of life. The ability to communicate effectively and clearly is very valuable. Good writing skills will serve you well both in academia and in the world of work.
  2. I think when I was working on the essay 4, the most challenging thing was to follow instructions and use guidelines and patterns. Sometimes, I might be off-topic.
  3. I know that I should determine the type of essay I am going to write before I start. I should read my assignments carefully and decide on my argument. Then, I can get started.

April 24 in class-writing

Today I want to talk about Max George who was an actress of two broken girls.

Max George Black the main character of the show 2 Broke Girls. She lives with her best friend Caroline Channing and they both work at the Williamsburg Diner.

最大破碎的女孩的图像结果

 

Her sharp tongue is really impression for people. According to research, she is more attractive than other actresses.  

Max is quite the opposite of Caroline: She is sarcastic, street-smart, feisty and comes from a dysfunctional family. Her main ambition is to get high and laid, preferably at the same time. Poor background and a broken home make her a very exquisite character. Filled with wits, she is content with a regular life. Having been a waitress for almost her entire life, she has had to fend for herself. This has led her to become slightly bitter, but she tries to hide it with her sarcasm as her emotional shield.

After Caroline finds out about her talents at baking cupcakes, she hatches a plan to start a cupcake business with Max, with her as the baker and Caroline as the business head, but they find that they will first need $250,000, to pay for property, permits, and equipment.

Apr 19th class writing

For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resents that he didn’t have both biological parents at home. I try to get to know him better, but he would complain that I invade his privacy. As a newcomer, I understood that out relationship will require effort from both of us, It is not enough that I was friendly. Jonathan also has to want us to be friends, and I was not happy with the two of us being strangers, but I can wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.

correct as:

For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resents that he did not have both biological parents at home. I tried to get to know him better, but he would complain that I invaded his privacy. As a newcomer, I understood that our relationship will require effort from both of us. It was not enough that I am friendly. Jonathan also wants us to be friends, and I was not happy with the two of us being strangers but I could wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.

2.

Anne Marie collects antique bottles and loves to turn them into works of art. She buys bottles if she liked them, but she prefers to find them on the ground. She will find bottles everywhere, but she picks them selectively. However, she has the best luck at construction sites on old farmland, where she spent most of her time. Often, bottles appeared on the surface after a good rain, but they disappear very soon. She will use special tools for excavating bottles, including a set of brushes. She did not want to break the bottles as she removes them from the ground. Ater finding a new bottle, Anne Marie will add it to her display case and hung on the wall as an artistic piece(Mangelsdorf, 2013, p.411).

1.Shoot Off One’s Mouth

talking off hand, simply speaking my mind. saying anything he want no evidence

2.Smell a Rat

fell something unsafe or suspicious

3.Take the Bull by the Horns

don’t afraid anything,

4.Let the cat out of the Bag

 let the secret out to others

5.Cat Got Your Tongue?

speechless. wordless

Mar 24th In class writing

You’ve used mixed pronouns for your cousin, both he and she? Is your cousin a female or a male? Please use pronouns consistently.

In fact, my cousin is a male, I am just always forgotten to translate the gentle first view.

 

In what ways?

The way is what am learn from the travel,

 

What specific learning about cultural and language differences did you have?

I think the cultural diversity is amazing for human history, The different cultural mean to every single country evolution and civilization, But it brings some disadvantage for people. Some people immigrate from other countries, they can’t fit on the native cultural.

 

Mar 10th in class writing

DeLu Wang

Meng Shuai

 

12 Years a Slave: The film tells of a free black living in New York, educated and married. Then they met two people, who promised to help him find a job in Washington, when Solomon went to Washington to find himself kidnapped, and began his slave career, After years of hardship to rely on a good Canadians to help send letters home, after a lawsuit, he regained freedom.

 

 

In the antebellum United States, Solomon Northup, a free black man from upstate New York, is abducted and sold into slavery.

Based on an incredible true story of one man’s fight for survival and freedom. In the pre-Civil War United States, Solomon Northup, a free black man from upstate New York, is abducted and sold into slavery. Facing cruelty personified by a malevolent slave owner, as well as unexpected kindnesses, Solomon struggles not only to stay alive but to retain his dignity. In the twelfth year of his unforgettable odyssey, Solomon’s chance meeting with a Canadian abolitionist will forever alter his life.

 

 

 

 

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Mar 6th in class writing

Granados, C. (2014).True Colors(pp. 121–124). In R. Atwan (Ed.), America now shorting reading from recent periodicals(p 125) Boston, MA, Bedford/St, Martin’s.

 

Naomi Zack(2013) More Than Skin Deep(p145-150). In R. Atwan (Ed.), America now shorting reading from recent periodicals(p 125) Boston, MA, Bedford/St, Martin’s.

 

Mar 3th In class freewriting

Free-writing

article summer 

In the “True Colors.” by Christine Granados(p,122-124) who has always want to live like Americans.

The author provide a story about her mother.

Her mother was a typical Mexican likes to collects knickknacks.

They immigrant from mexico to American.

her mother still keep the culture of mexico.

her mother put frogs in the yard.

but the author asked her boyfriend to steal it.

Because she don’t like the cultural of Mexican.

When she became a mother, she understand her mother behavior.

 

General ideals

it is necessary for people to search the root of original culture rather than abandon it.

 

my perspective

I think as the time pass, a lot of Mexican want to live in the American, Like in the north of China people want to live in Beijing. My hometown was nearby Beijing, i can drive to Beijing in 1 hour, Sometime i like the author, i don’t like my hometown cultural. i like life style like Beijing people. after i come to US, i realize that people could develop what are they like, but we should keep the original cultural form us. we should not throw it.  it is necessary for people to search the root of original culture rather than abandon it.

 

1) The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school, and they make us unique.      
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.2) What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere they would get left behind.   
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3) The chickens bring laughter to our students, without them we’d be an ordinary school.       
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.4) I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately, I stepped on the chickens’ dump.   
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.5) Right now there many chickens living freely on campus but many professors don’t want chickens.  
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6) Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they causestinky odors make noise and no one wants to clean after.   
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