April 28 in-class writing

  1. I think when I was working on essay 4, I realized that the more you write, the better you get at writing. It’s as simple as that. Sometimes the best way to improve yourself in an area is just to keep trying. Good writing skills are benefits in every area of life. The ability to communicate effectively and clearly is very valuable. Good writing skills will serve you well both in academia and in the world of work.
  2. I think when I was working on the essay 4, the most challenging thing was to follow instructions and use guidelines and patterns. Sometimes, I might be off-topic.
  3. I know that I should determine the type of essay I am going to write before I start. I should read my assignments carefully and decide on my argument. Then, I can get started.

April 24 in class-writing

Today I want to talk about Max George who was an actress of two broken girls.

Max George Black the main character of the show 2 Broke Girls. She lives with her best friend Caroline Channing and they both work at the Williamsburg Diner.

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Her sharp tongue is really impression for people. According to research, she is more attractive than other actresses.  

Max is quite the opposite of Caroline: She is sarcastic, street-smart, feisty and comes from a dysfunctional family. Her main ambition is to get high and laid, preferably at the same time. Poor background and a broken home make her a very exquisite character. Filled with wits, she is content with a regular life. Having been a waitress for almost her entire life, she has had to fend for herself. This has led her to become slightly bitter, but she tries to hide it with her sarcasm as her emotional shield.

After Caroline finds out about her talents at baking cupcakes, she hatches a plan to start a cupcake business with Max, with her as the baker and Caroline as the business head, but they find that they will first need $250,000, to pay for property, permits, and equipment.

Apr 19th class writing

For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resents that he didn’t have both biological parents at home. I try to get to know him better, but he would complain that I invade his privacy. As a newcomer, I understood that out relationship will require effort from both of us, It is not enough that I was friendly. Jonathan also has to want us to be friends, and I was not happy with the two of us being strangers, but I can wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.

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For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resents that he did not have both biological parents at home. I tried to get to know him better, but he would complain that I invaded his privacy. As a newcomer, I understood that our relationship will require effort from both of us. It was not enough that I am friendly. Jonathan also wants us to be friends, and I was not happy with the two of us being strangers but I could wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.

2.

Anne Marie collects antique bottles and loves to turn them into works of art. She buys bottles if she liked them, but she prefers to find them on the ground. She will find bottles everywhere, but she picks them selectively. However, she has the best luck at construction sites on old farmland, where she spent most of her time. Often, bottles appeared on the surface after a good rain, but they disappear very soon. She will use special tools for excavating bottles, including a set of brushes. She did not want to break the bottles as she removes them from the ground. Ater finding a new bottle, Anne Marie will add it to her display case and hung on the wall as an artistic piece(Mangelsdorf, 2013, p.411).

1.Shoot Off One’s Mouth

talking off hand, simply speaking my mind. saying anything he want no evidence

2.Smell a Rat

fell something unsafe or suspicious

3.Take the Bull by the Horns

don’t afraid anything,

4.Let the cat out of the Bag

 let the secret out to others

5.Cat Got Your Tongue?

speechless. wordless