May 1st in class writing

  1.  Reality shows are some of the best shows on television.   Brave reality can give us many truth that we can saws on the whole television.
  2. A successful marriage requires patience, good communication, and a sense of humor.    There are three very important parts that successful marriage requires, there are patience, good communication, and a sense of humor.
  3. There have been too many budget cuts at this university.  From past to now, there are more and more budget cut at this enormous university.
  4. If you have time on your hands, do community volunteer work.   I encourage you to  join more community volunteer work to help more people, also can steel yourself, if you have any free time. 
  5. Even through I didn’t make the Olympic ski team, my years of training taught me important skills, such as discipline, time management, focus, and persistence.      Although I didn’t make the Olympic ski team, but for many years experience of training taught me important skills, for example: discipline, time management, focus, and persistence.

essay 4, free writing, need do many research. and some about humans right. especially for woman, between man and woman there are many thing unequal. like we write in response. for these research i have to think about it what to search and then search it online. from now, i have no idea what im gona write, maybe later on i will have idea. but at least now, i dont have any idea. may to think about what need to research first. maybe to look up the prompt again to see some details. anyway, i have no idea about essay at least now. i have 3 paper due this week , one ethics one theology and this one. so im so im so busy and tired. next semester im going to take rhet110n, its gona be more harder than this. so i will work more hard and pay more attention during the class. this is my currently thought. not instead of my mind. i wish my essay 4’s grade could be higher. at least higher than the obvisous three essay. i learn so many knlowlege in this class. .

still not have idea, what to write, i have to work on reflection essay, after that ill work on essay 4.

Apr 28th in class writing

  1. I may learned to equip a strong research skill is the most important skill should get when working on this assignment.
  2. The challenge I may face when working on this assignment is to research a lot of reference about this essay.
  3. At now, I have no idea about organize my essay. I have to do some research and then decide how to organize my essay.

April 26th in class writing

  1. The reality show follows the lives of Bruce and Kris Jenner’s combined family; however, most of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughters, Kourtney, Kim and Khloe Kardashian.
  2. Bruce Jenner was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics; moreover, his sons from a previous marriage, Brandon and Brody, have also appeared on their own reality shows.
  3. The Kardashians’ father, the late attorney Robert Kardashian, was famous for representing O.J.Simpson; while his daughters gained recognition as American socialites.
  4. Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex-tape scandal and resulting Playboy appearance, so the Kardashian fame grew into a profitable reality series.
  5. The show depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians and spin-off shows feature Kourtney, Kim, and Khloe’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques.
  6. The Kardashians’ behaviour at first seemed outrageous, but they are a loving family.
  7. The Kardashians squabble like typical siblings, Kris, and the mother hold the family together.
  8. Kim’s $10 million wedding to pro basketball player(,) Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen by an estimated 10.5 million viewers, so the marriage lasted only 72 days.

Apr24th in class writing

The female I would like to introduce is Xiaoqin Gao. In 《 In the Name of the People》, she is a female leading role. She act a chairman of the Sunnsy Group. Also, she is Tongwei Qi’s mistress, whose a head of Police Department. She is superior appearance, bow down and stare in wonder. But woefully because of beauty is too outstanding, she has a relationship with many men, and in the next four years of abortion three times.  And Xiaoqin Gao was given to Yuliang Gao students Tongwei Qi, and even Xiaoqin Gao and Tongwei Qi have a son. Xiaoqin Gao finally escape failed, she was arrested in jail. As a woman, Xiaoqin Gao is really poor, because the beauty was used to have to subordinate to become a plaything. As a mother, Xiaoqin Gao is sad, she can not with his son together, she can only entrust sister support. Xiaoqin Gao and Tongwei Qi the so-called love is not destined to be under the sun.



Apr 19th in class writing

For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resented that he did not have both biological parents at home. I tried to get to know him better, but he would complain that I invaded his privacy. As a newcomer, I understood that out relationship would required effort from both of us, It was not enough that I was friendly. Jonathan also had to wants us to be friends, and I was not happy with the two of us being strangers, but I could wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.

Anne Marie collects antique bottles and love to turn them into works of art. She will buy bottles if she likes them, but she prefers to find them in the ground. She will find bottles everywhere, but she picks them selectively. However, she has the best luck at construction sites on old farmland, where she spents most of her time. Often, bottles appear on the surface after a good rain, but they disappear very soon She will use special tools for excavating bottles, including a set of brushes, She dose not want to break the bottles as she removes them from the ground. After finding a new bottle. Anne Marie will add it to her display case and hung on the wall as an artistic piece(Mangelsdorf, 2013, p.411).

Turn Someone Off means let someone has nothing feeling.

lemon means let someone trust you, but you cheat that people.

Horse around means you play roughly and carelessly.

For the birds means doesnt make any sense.

Fishy means you feel that someone is not telling the truth or behaving completely honestly.

Mar 29th in class writing

group member: Shuai Meng, Kaiting Zhou, Qiaodan Lou

Chinese culture is very different than american culture.

old Chinese culture is very typical,

most Chinese women wants to be stay housewife.

but according to Solnit essay, only 20 percent women in the us wants to be a housewife.

with the development of education,  modern Chinese start to realize their value, and they can be as good as men. so in modern family, men and women are play equal rule, they all earn money to support their family.

Question 1: two side

China: Chinese today is like in smally family unit, parents has job, so their parents are taking over the kid care.

Uganda: traditional family got influence from Europeans. Traditional family live in “dumb” life. But with the influence of other colony contries, they starts to live a mordern life. 64% of the member of house are female. That is very impressive. They gets a lots of power and start to take charge of the society.  So it is totally different now.


You are my horizon of the most beautiful clouds,let me heart to stay you。

you are the most beautiful people I have ever seem, I want to keep you with all my heart.



Mar 27th in class writing

In Qiao’s response, i can tell nowadays China family cultural is looks like a circle. After the parents gave birth to the child. approximately 80 percent Chinese parents will gave their child to their parent’s parent. Their natural parents are going to make money to pay alimony. After child grow up, their grandma and grandpa becomes cannot take care of themselves in their life. So, its turn around, that child have to take care their grandma and grandpa, also have to take care of their parents.  Even we grow up already, but in parents’ eyes, we’ll always be a child.

Mar 24th in class writing


in my essay, i think i used well example to support the idea, also i use my own example to support. it can be more strongly to support the idea.

the things i need to improve is grammar, and some places i need to add more detail.

the grammar i have to improve is verb tense mixing present and past verbs.