Mar 24th in class writing

 

in my essay, i think i used well example to support the idea, also i use my own example to support. it can be more strongly to support the idea.

the things i need to improve is grammar, and some places i need to add more detail.

the grammar i have to improve is verb tense mixing present and past verbs.

 

 

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