In Class Writing – March24

Identifying and understanding comments on Essay 1 :

1. What seems to have worked well ?

I have successfully made and understood the right organization for writing in APA style. I also used correct grammar and sentences with just few mistakes.

2. What needs to be improved and how ?

I just have to give some specific details and examples on some parts that were marked by the instructor, including little errors on grammar and run-on sentences.

3. What particular grammar aspect that you need to improve in your writing later ?

I just need to correct the use of s at the end of verbs, and also the use of have and has in the sentences.

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