Identifying and understanding comments on Essay 1 :
1. What seems to have worked well ?
I have successfully made and understood the right organization for writing in APA style. I also used correct grammar and sentences with just few mistakes.
2. What needs to be improved and how ?
I just have to give some specific details and examples on some parts that were marked by the instructor, including little errors on grammar and run-on sentences.
3. What particular grammar aspect that you need to improve in your writing later ?
I just need to correct the use of s at the end of verbs, and also the use of have and has in the sentences.