In reading, Nathan Centeno he focuses on the main issues in the U.S today. He explains the depiction behind each main point very detailed and efficient. He ties in the story and how it relates to the reader. The writing format of his response was very organized and met the requirements for analyzing the article.
Its more on the shorter side, where he can definitely expand with his ideas. He does give concrete details, I would recommend 2 concrete details than an opinion to really emphasize what he wants to convey to the reader. By doing this keeping them more engaged in the summary of his writing.