Feb 22 in-class writing

1) The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school, they make us unique.      
Type: CS
The chicken on campus play a famous role for our school; they made us unique.
2) What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere they would get left behind.     
Type: R.
What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere, they would get left behind。
3) The chickens bring laughter to our students, without them we’d be an ordinary school.               
Type: CS
The chickens bring laughter to our students. Without them we’d be an ordinary school.
4) I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately, I stepped on the chickens’ dump.    
Type: CS
I remember that I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately, and I stepped on the chiekens’ dump after my first class..
5) Right now there many chickens living freely on campus but many professors don’t want chickens.  
Type:CS
Right now there many chicken living freely on campus, but many professors don’t want chickens..
6) Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they cause stinky odors make noise and no one wants to clean after.          

Type:CS

Chicken should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they causestinky odors make noise, and no one wants to clean after.
7) Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn they need a place that look clean and have a fresh air therefore they can not take a nap or study.      
Type:R
Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn; they need a place that look clean, and have a fresh air. Therefore they can not take a nap or study.
8)  But I strongly disagree with that opinion, chickens should not be allowed on campus at all.      
Type:CS
But i strongly disagree with that opinion;chickens should not be allowed on campus at all..
9) During the time students are in the lab if the chickens make a lot a noise the students won’t focus to do their job.  
Type:R
During the time students are in the lab, the students won’t focus to do their job if the chickens make a lot of noise..
10) In conclusion, if the chickens live freely on campus because students let them live free then these students should clean the chickens mess.   
Type:R
in conclusion, if the chicken live freely on campus because students let them live free, then these students should clean the chickens mess..

Feb 8th

Qiaojian Hu, Han jiapeng, Maggie Xu

Amy Tan speaks academic English with American, So she can proper service. However, author’s mother’ English is bad, she uses the “broken” English, so she can not enjoy these service in the daily life. For example, her stockbroker didn’t send the check for her.

Most immigrants’ first language are not English. Most language can not complete translating to the different language. Therefore,  when immigrants speak English, they will be affected by their first language.  If these immigrants speak the first language in their home, the children also are affected by their parents. Therefore, these children can not have a good English atmosphere.

Feb3 In-class Writing

I see a person, his whole face is red. one of his hand point to another person and another hand is clenched. his mouth is opening, looks like try to say something.

 

When I was a child, my parents do not really allow me to play games and social media. In their mind,  everything that makes me want to play on the computers is a drug, because I cannot focus on study anymore since I use computers. At that time, I always thinking about how can I get an amazing picture to post online, topic that I chat with my friend and really want to finish homework as soon as possible. Maybe, because I was a young child, I cannot behavior myself. Thus, my parent allows me can only use the computer for two hours per day, which actually make me more eager to use the computer. My parents do not stay in the home on weekend, So they hid internet cable for keeping me away for social media. Of course, I always try my best to find the cable. Then, during that time, I was really like a crazy. However, the situation has changed since I  grow up. My parents gradually do not limit the time, that I spend on the social media. And I also do not spend too much time on the social media, as play too much make me feeling boring. Meanwhile I grow up, I am allowed to go outside with my friend, which is more interesting than spend time on social media.

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