Mar 24th in class writing

From my point of view, I did well on the compare Chinese and American education system.

Base on the feedback, about the content, I write too much about the different between China and America, I need write more about my own experience.

Moreover, I think I should work more on the past and present term. For the next time I  should be careful and think more before I type words out.

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