Nov.15th in Class Writing

After I read Romeo’s response, I recognize I have similar ideas with him.

  • those three essays are promoted to lower the income inequality
  • they all approach the “American Dream”

 

The feedback of Essay #2

Things I need to improve:

  • I need to read the APA file deeply and fix the citation
  • express my ideas and opinions deeply and clearly
  • the title should not be italicized

 

Nov.8th Combine Sentences Penny Natalie

  1. The reality show follows the lives of Bruce, Kris, Jenner’s combined family and most of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughters who are Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé Kardashian.
  2. Bruce Jenner was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics. Therefore, his sons from a previous marriage, Brandon and Brody, have also appeared on their own reality shows.
  3. The Kardashians’ father, Robert Kardashian was famous for representing O. J. Simpson so his daughters gained recognition as American socialites.
  4. Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex- tape scandal and resulting Playboy appearance, therefore the Kardashian fame grew into a profitable reality series.
  5. The show depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians and Spin-off shows feature Kourtney, Kim, and also Khloé’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques.
  6. The Kardashians’ first behavior seemed outrageous, however, they are a loving family.
  7. The Kardashians squabble like the typical siblings, but Kris and mother hold the family together.
  8. Kim’s $ 10 million wedding to pro basketball player and Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen by an estimated 10.5 million viewers, however, the marriage lasted only 72 days.

Nov.6 Penny, Hua-Ting, Freda

In our video essay, there are three members in our group who are Freda, Hia-Ting and me. We distributed the work for each one equally. Freda is in the math major and Hua-Ting and I is in the business major.  Therefore, we went to interview with professors first and then Freda to be responsible for editing the video. Afterward, we will record our voice and put into the video. The purpose of our video essay is to convince and persuade others to join our majors so we need to make our major interesting. Therefore, we went to the business and math club or some activities to take pictures.

This is our plan:

Business script: Penny, Hua-Ting

Interview: 3 members

Edit: Freda

Recording: Hua-Ting

Math: The structure of the math department, activity: why should we choose it, interview, the benefit, the  introduction

Business: the future job, allow individuals not only develop personal skills but also the presentation and communication skills

Script: until Nov. 8th

Interview: before the end of Oct.

Shoot: until Nov. 5th

https://youtu.be/xZOWNvP4KYE

Nov.1 in Class Writing

After I read Romeo’s response on Canvas, I believe we have similar ideas and feedbacks about this essay. First of all, we all think the Pengfei and his families are pitiful and sad about them because they were in an era which is very difficult to survive and live. The one-child rule made them lose lots of things such as the job and the learning opportunity as well. Secondly, we all believe we are all lucky that we have a good learning environment and can go to school to receive the education and also live in a very developed country which has high technology.