Nov.15th in Class Writing

After I read Romeo’s response, I recognize I have similar ideas with him.

  • those three essays are promoted¬†to lower the income inequality
  • they all approach¬†the “American Dream”

 

The feedback of Essay #2

Things I need to improve:

  • I need to read the APA file deeply and fix the citation
  • express my ideas and opinions deeply and clearly
  • the title should not be italicized

 

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