18/10/30 In class writing

After reading the response from Shen Yao, I find out something in common compared to my response. First of all, we both agree with the argument that taking a variety of courses in college is “about learning to be a well-rounded student ready for anything in the workforce”. Both of us think that important fundamental knowledge like Math and writing skill are necessary for every student since we all need to use them every day in our life, especially in workplace. Shen Yao believe that the reason for half of students saying their higher education weren’t worth the cost is the debt issue, since most of them concern their future salary are not equal to the high tuition they paid for studying. However, I think the biggest reason why they didn’t think the higher education worth the cost is they had not taken part in experiences like an internship relevant to their studies or a long-term project. Once they have a chance to work at the real workplace I believe they will know that what they learn isn’t wasted, and those knowledge are pretty valuable not only in the workplace but also in other aspect of lives.

18/10/25 In class writing-outline of essay 3

Group member: Yifu Wu, Hao Wang, Parker

Major we choose: Computer Science

Intro of our video essay: List some possible job option (engineer, programer, game design, AI) -Yifu

How computer science work in USF -Hao

textbook (Python) -Yifu

Interview (with a CS department Professor) -Parker

Benefit of being a computer scientist – Hao

future develpement of CS, how amazing of being a computer scientist -Parker

different lifestyle of being a computer scientist (video online) -Yifu

 

18/10/25 In class writing-analyze of example video essay

video essay topic: DC films’ character problem

Summary:

This video essay list many examples of the DC superhero characters, and illustrate their problems by comparing to the characters of Marvel Superhero Universe. It emphasize that even thought the DC superhero movies make lots money, these movies have relatively negative comment compare to the Marvel because they didn’t define these DC films’ character into a deeper way.

feature:

  1. This video essay edit and use many relative senses or video clips from the movies which closely connected to the narrate.
  2. It has a clear structure by comparing to the character from Marvel films’ character, and the whole video including the titles, quotes, images, or senses from other movies are totally supported to the theme.
  3. The tone that the author use to narrate sounds very comfortable and efficient without say a useless word. The video is pretty compact and the audiences are draw into it without feeling boring even the video is almost 12 minute long.

 

2018/10/23 In class writing-bullet point of response

Candice’s video : Lots of close-up shot, voiceover narration, not enough writing (highlights the specific limitations of the prevailing model for digital video)

Katie: prevalence of text slides, text appear about 40 seconds of a 2:29 video, still and moving images are also rife with text, not

visual enough

Conclusion: Not rely on a model that privileges alphabetic text and the use of still images, since a linear stage-model is insufficient to account for the multiple relationship between and among word/image/sound that they wrestled with

10/02/18 In class writing-Summary

In the essay “Dream Deferred” by Amber Floyd, the author illustrates the favor and against viewpoints of whether passing the Dream Act or not. She concludes the against viewpoints into 3 different elements and the first one is that the act promotes unjust ideals since it promotes the rights of children over their parents which discourages the stability and unity of families, and it impacts the family interdependence negatively (Floyd, p.184). The second element is the act damages the benefit of American legal citizens, since government needs to spend tens of millions of taxpayer’s dollars annually to pay for tuition for illegal immigrants when so many law-abiding families are struggling to meet the ever-increasing costs of higher education for their own children (Floyd, p.184). The last element is the Dream Act will give difficulties to the colleges and universities to address the standard issues in educating low-income populations, and if the act is passed, institutions would then be forced to adjust in a way that benefits the students and provides them with the best way to learn regardless of their socio-economic background (Floyd, p.184). After presenting all these opposite viewpoints, the author states that most of these illegal immigrant students spent most of their times in the United States and consider themselves as Americans since they came here in a very young age. Therefore, it is unfair for them to not go to the college just because they are not illegal citizens of America. The favor viewpoint is college eligibility should be determined based upon ability and willingness to work hard, and the issue of citizenship should not be taken into account when it comes to the right to an education (Floyd, p.184). In the end the author’s opinion is supporting the Dream Act since the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, and in receiving an education, the Dreamers are among America’s next generation of leaders, educating them will only help to ensure the future quality of this great nation (Floyd, p.184).