November 15

There is a long way for me to go about writing articles.

First of all, I think the most important thing is that I should have my own opinions instead of just copying the words from the article.

Secondly, I should pay more attentions to the world:”the”, there are too many “the” in my article.

Thirdly, I should use punctuation correctly, I missed some commas and others in my article.

Also, The allocation of tow articles in my paper is not equality.

November 8

Raha, Huating,Edwin.

1.The reality show follows the lives of Bruce and Kris Jenner’s combined family, and most of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughters, Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé Kardashian.

2. Bruce Jenner was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics; His sons from a previous marriage, Brandon and Brody, have also appeared on their own reality shows.

3. The Kardashians’ father, the late attorney Robert Kardashian, was famous for representing O. J. Simpson, so his daughters gained recognition as American socialites.
4. Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex- tape scandal and resulting playboy appearance; Therefore, The Kardashian fame grew into a profitable reality series.
5. The show depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians, also spin- off shows featureKourtney, Kim, and Khloé’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques.
6. The Kardashians’ behavior at first seemed outrageous, however, they are a loving family. uild their line of fashion boutiques.
7. The Kardashians squabble like typical siblings, but kris, the mother, holds the family together.
8. Kim’s $ 10 million wedding to pro basketball player Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen by an estimated 10.5 million viewers, however, The marriage lasted only 72 days.

November 1

In Joanne’s idea,in the online essay, “Global Digital Divide,” Pengfei Song discusses his life story from when he was a child to a teenager and to an adult. As he grows, the society around him is also changing and developing every day. He notices the quick development of technology in his country and slowly his family and him adapt to this information society.

In my opinion,I like the description of his parents in this article. Pengfei Song’s mother regarded the education as the most important thing in her son’s life, under this situation, Pengfei Song is able to be a successful person in modern society. Without Pengfei’s parents’ awareness of education, it was really hard for him to get high quality education under that poor education environment in china.From those descriptions, I feel the importance of family education. So, I firmly believe that only excellent parents can produce excellent children.

On summary, both Joanne and I think that the family education is really important for Pengfei’s success.