There is a long way for me to go about writing articles.
First of all, I think the most important thing is that I should have my own opinions instead of just copying the words from the article.
Secondly, I should pay more attentions to the world:”the”, there are too many “the” in my article.
Thirdly, I should use punctuation correctly, I missed some commas and others in my article.
Also, The allocation of tow articles in my paper is not equality.