3.2 2018 in class writing

I want to talk about the essay which is talking about the birthright citizenship,“Birthright Citizenship Is the Good Kind of American Exceptionalism” written by  Eric  Foner.

First, in the essay of Eric Foner, he claimed that birthright citizenship is a good kind of American exceptionalism since it is beneficial for establishing the principle idea of equality in the United States. The reason why it is helpful for the equality in the United States is that the 14th Amendment was to state that anyone borned here can be a good American, which also made the white men’s government become Americans’ government.

In my opinion, the beginning thought for the 14th Amendment is pretty good and beneficial which claims the equality very much that every one has the opportunity to be a great American but not like old times when only the white men have right. However,the world changed;nowadays there are so many immigrants,and the growing rate population of immigrants is getting  bigger and bigger, which makes some people think that the gigantic population of immigrants gives America more advantages than disadvantages or more disadvantage than advantages. Although, immigrants bring many kind of problems like the security problem as a result of the illegal immigration, immigrants are still much more beneficial for the United Stated. According to the research, Immigrants do stimulate and encourage the economic growth a lot nowadays. Thus birthright citizenship is a advantageous policy which protects the equality, and impacts the United States’ society positively because of their economic role in America. What’s more, we cannot ignore the social problem as well such as the racism.

2.23 2018

identify plagiarism

1. no,this information is common knowledge

2.Yes, although  the whole class is reading the same book, tam should let people know when he is citing

3. Yes, Can’t use the same material for different class

4yes, they need to let people know what websites they used.

5yes, although she paraphrased, she still need to cite the sources. This is not her own works.

2.21 2018 in class writing

American idioms:Money talks : i like it because this idiom show the power of money vividly

The early bird catches the worm: This idiom is also famous in China

bite the dust: i had read this before but i didn’t know the exact meaning.

Feel like a million dollars: it is pretty straight forward to express happiness. And i like this kind of direct expression

An old salt: It is interesting but precise to call a experienced sailor an old salt since                                                                     sailor always lives with sea.

2.12 2018 audioessay pitch

I want to talk about my experience of learning spinning pen and what  i gained in the process of learning pen spinning.

As i was a high school student, i watched a video about pen spinning. It is so cool that i decided to learn about it. Then i researched about pen spinning, which i knew there are many pen spinners all over the world and there is a plenty of organizations such as PSH and JEB in different countries.  There is a world-wide competition every year that People from totally different places with different cultural background are communicating with each other friendly for developing this special sport better. It is a interesting thing that there becomes a culture of pen spinning through the time and this new-borned culture enable people to have a great communication. Some  people even go abroad  in order to meet their foreign friends of pen spinning. I believe that in their view, they do not care a lot about  their friends’ identity, cultural background and languages since they are the same who love spinning pen. This kind of social phenomenon is common nowadays as a result of the globalization and the development of technology. Although there are so many conflicts happened in the process of globalization as well, i hold a strong belief that people can finally find a perfect method to those problems after i learned about pen spinning and then realized the magic power of “new culture”.

Say something else I had learned from pen spinning. I became more and more intereted about pen spining However, skills about spinnin are not as easy as i thought. There are many various tricks invented by different pen spinners. Most of tricks are complicated and hard to learn that you need to pratice hundreds times for doing the trick perfectly. You will fail hundreds times until you are skilled,which made me realize that failure is common but you need to study from the failure then you will make great progress. In the process of learning tricks, i learned to be extremely patient as well since some of tricks will cost your several mouths until you are able to do it perfectly. Also, it train my concentration that when you are praticing, you really need to focus on controlling your fingers precisely. Futher more, i found that having passion can extremely help you to learn things esaily. In other words, interest is the best teacher. Thus,when learning things, it is essential to find where your passion about.

 

2.9 2018 free writing Audio essay

I want to talk about my experience of learning spinning pen. As i was a high school student, i watched a video about pen spinning. It is so cool that i decided to learn about. Then i researched about pen spining, which i knew there are many pen spinners all over the world and there is a plenty of organizations in different countries such as PSH and JEB. I became intereted about pen spining However, skills about spinnin are not as easy as i thought. There are so many various tricks invented by different pen spinners. Most of tricks are complicated and hard to learn that you need to pratice hundreds times to do the trick perfectly. You will fail hundreds times until you are skilled,which made me realize that failure is common but you need to gain from the failure then you will make progress  In the process of learning tricks, i learned to be extremely patient since some of tricks will cost your several  mouths until you are able to do it. Also, it train my concentration that when you are praticing, you really need to focus on controlling your fingers. What’s  more, i made many new friends who also play penspinning

Outline: Watch  a video

Research about Pen spinning

learnning complicated tricks

concentration

failure

patient

friends

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