- Big brother, master was removed by the goblin.
- Little brother, master was removed by the goblin.
- Big brother and little brother, master was removed by the goblin.
How are gender roles changing in your culture/society?
Xizhe Sun& Yifan Liang& Jiapeng Han
Women were gradually becoming more and more independent in recent years. In the past, women just took care of their children and focused on the housework. However, they no longer rely on men now, and they began to use their own hands and knowledge to make money. Women act the important role in the society. We can find a lot of women working in the government; in ancient China, a woman can not participate in politics, so men and women are becoming equal now. Not only government, women have achieved great success in different areas, like, business, doctor, policewomen. In the career, men’s opponents from men into men and women mixed. Women have won a respectable status by using their own hands now.
Look at the moon before the bed,
suspected to be frost on the ground.
Looked up and looked at his hometown.
four sentence to three, lose of mountain and moon.
There was a mountain in the mountains, there was a temple in the temple, and there was an old monk and a little monk in the temple. One day, the old monk said to the little monk that there was a mountain in the mountains and a temple in the mountains. Monk, one day, the old monk of the little monk said: There used to be a mountain, the mountain has a temple, the temple has a monk and a little monk, one day, the old monk to the little monk said …….
After reading Kaiting’s response, I have the same idea with him that Chinese parents spend more time on working instead of spend time with their children.
Identifying and understanding comments on Essay 1
- what seems to have worked well
On my essay 1, it seems I did well on the structure on my essay, and I have some good examples.
2. what needs to be improved and how
I have some examples, but it is not specific. I need more details about my examples to improve the supportability. I need think about more about details when I was writing.
composition is a terrible problem, some times I think a word, but I type another. I need to writer more.
3. What particular grammer aspect you need to improve in your writing later
My verb tense is a big problem. In my whole writing in University, I have some mistakes about it on my each paper. I need to be more patient when I was typing fast. Some times, I know I am writing the past tense, but I would forget in next several sentences. I will check my whole essay after I finish my paper in the future.
In 1865 January, the US civil war is about to end, the North victory soon. For Lincoln, he was unable to change the constitution of the United States in order to eliminate the slavery system on the battlefield without smoke, and only to promote the adoption of the 13th amendment. But Lincoln suffered a double pressure from outside the party, his opponent, the Democratic Party from the south, wanted to stick to slavery, and Lincoln’s Republican Party repeatedly asked Lincoln to postpone the vote. Everyone is reluctant to see the day on which the African race has equal rights, and everyone will be afraid of what he can not control. It is the hardest time for Abraham Lincoln.
Spielberg, A, S. (director). (2012). Abraham Lincoln [Movie]. San Francisco, CA: DreamWorks Pictures.
Tan A. (n.d.). Mother tongue. Class Canvas material.
Zack, N. (2015). More than skin deep. In R. Atwan (Ed.), America now: Short readings from recent periodicals (pp. 144-150). Boston, MA:
Learning a new language is hard for a teenager or adult, but for baby, They can easily grasp two different languages. My little brother of my uncle on my mother side is a good example, he born in Austria. My uncle taught him both English and Chinese when he starts speaking. Now he is 7 years old, he can use English like a foreigner, the mother language is English. Moreover, he often played with kids who spoke English in the community. I must say, My English skill is worse than him. English is real important now. Most Chinese parents found the English classes for their children. And now, English is generic Language in the whole world. If people want to travel around the world. English is important.
The US is a country made of different kind of people, they spoke the different language. Even some people all speak English, but they still can not understand each other’s idea. And now it is a big problem for America. More and more immigrants came to America, The kinds of language are more and more, Government needs to solve this problem, make all people speak the same language.
From reading Mother tongue, English is important for the people in America. learning English is important
learning english from Children is better than in the childhood.
More and more immigrants came to US, Governments need to make same language.
different culture decides the way people thinking.
Summary to Yifan’s response.
This response is written by Yifan about his experience about Yook’s essay “Positive Stereotypes Are Hurtful, Too”. Yifan had the same idea with Yook that all Asians are smart in some people’s mind. Yifan had a similar experience that his roommate always asked him math question because Yifan is an Asian, and Yifan had no idea to tell his roommate that he did not know how to do it and he is a Chinese.