April19 In-class Writing

Verb tence activity

For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resented that he didn’t have both biological parents at home. I tried wo get to know him better, but he would complain that I invaded his privacy. As a newcomer, I understood that our relationship would require effort from both of us. It was not enough that I was friendly. Jonathatn also had to want us to be friends, and I was not unhappy with the two of us being strangers, but I could wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.

Annie Marie collects antique bottle and loves to turn them into works of art. She will buy bottles if she picked them selectively. However, she has the best luck at ….likes… picks…  spends…  appear…  does not…  hangs…

1.Go to the Dogs someone become bad.

2.Take the Bull by the Horns not afraid face to chanllenge

3.Shoot Off One’s Mouth speak everything without thinking

4.Play It by Ear change the plan.

5.Bend Over Backwards  risk one’s life

Mar 10 In-class writing

Yifan and Jiapeng

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The movie Django Unchained is talking about Django is an Aferican American he make a friend is a doctor from Germany. This doctor help him get out of the slavery and he also saved his wife. The doctor died by helping them. Django killed everyone of his lanlord family. At last he and his wife get the freedom. It is irony that the lanlord favorite book is Alexandre Dumas’s book, but he don’t know that Alexandre Duman is a black man in France.

March 3 IN-CLASS WRITING

I am really interested in the essay The Proper Sieve for Immigrants. After reading that essay, I did some research about the immigrantion of the United States. Since the continent be found. This place attract many people of the word. But nowadays the child of immigrant of that time. The believe they are amercans and they think the innigrants of today is not americans. Now we can say that without immigrants, there are no today’s America. Today because of the economy and power. This place still attract many people from all over the world and immigrant here.

The outline of essay two:

I am going to talking about two essays of the book. summary it and response it. The topic of immigrants I feel very interesting and I am going to talking about the immigrant. The other’s essay I really interested in is the essay “True Colors.” I compare these two essay and analyse it. These two essay have similar place. It is both of the essay is talking about the innigrantion. My essay two is going to talking about thses two essays and use some example of my life and my friend. Also I can mention the 2016 present election, because it is the hot topic to election debate.

March 1 In-class Writing

Summary to Jiangpeng’s Response

Jiapeng’s response is talking about that hes own idea of these two essay. China in western country’s impression is bad. They thought China is dangerous. Jiapeng want every do not focus on the impression. Second essay talks everyone has own unique secenery and culture.

 

Xizhe Sun& Jiapeng Han& Yifan Liang

Siberia and Alaska are similar place. The weather of these two place is same. The mountain is covered by withe snow long time every year. Amimal species lived there are similar for example crabs. One is King crabs the other is Snow crabs. (snow crab)

(king crab)

Siberan fishing by breaking ice, but Alaska fishing in the sea.

Language of Seberan is Russian, Chinese and Mongolian and Alaska speak Russian and English.

Poeple in Alaska is Eskimos and Americans; in Seberan is Russian, Chinese and Mongolian.

Feb 24 in-class writing

  1. Do you agree that universities have the same obligation to uphold diversevoices that you might expect of our government? Why or why not?

In my opinion i disagree that university have the same obligation to the goverment. In university student have their own idea of the study, howerevr for the goverment they perfer people have same idea. It is easy for the goveronment to contoral and dominate.

America’s most prestigious university. And, like other great universities, it lies at the heart of the Ameri-
can experiment in democracy.

reference

Bloomberg, M. (May, 2014). On the Repression of Free Expression (from Commencement Speech at Harvard University)

Feb 22 2017 Run Sentence

Exercise

Identify the error type of the following sentences as run-on (R), comma splice (CS), or correct (C). Then correct the sentences.

1) The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school, they make us unique. Type_R___

_The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school; they make us unique.

2) What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere they would get left behind. Type_R__

What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere; they would get left behind.

3) The chickens bring laughter to our students, without them we’d be an ordinary school. Type_R_

The chickens bring laughter to our students; without them we’d be an ordinary school.

4) I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately, I stepped on the chickens’ dump. Type__R_

I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately; I stepped on the chickens’ dump.

5) Right now there many chickens living freely on campus but many professors don’t want chickens. Type_CS___

Right now, there many chickens living freely on campus but many professors don’t want chickens.

6) Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they cause

stinky odors make noise and no one wants to clean after. Type__CS

Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they cause

stinky odors make noise, and no one wants to clean after.

7) Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn they need a place that look clean and have a fresh air therefore they can not take a nap or study. Type_R__

Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn. They need a place that look clean and have a fresh air therefore they can not take a nap or study.

 

8) But I strongly disagree with that opinion, chickens should not be allowed on campus at all. Type_C_

 

9) During the time students are in the lab if the chickens make a lot a noise the students won’t focus to do their job. Type_R

During the time students are in the lab if the chickens make a lot a noise; the students won’t focus to do their job.

10) In conclusion, if the chickens live freely on campus because students let them live free then these students should clean the chickens mess. Type_CS__

In conclusion, if the chickens live freely on campus because students let them live free, then these students should clean the chickens mess.

essay one free writing

Different people have different accent and culture. When the two communicating parties use a Shared mother tongue communication, the cultural factors of barrier function may appear. The influence of cultural factors of language communicative meaning is multifaceted. T Nowadays, English is becoming more and more important to us, if you want to learn English well, first, must understand the culture of the english-speaking countries, the language and culture, has the close relation, English teaching should focus on the relationship between language and culture, attach importance to the transmission of cultural knowledge, promote the students to better learn English well.