Feb 24 in-class writing

  1. Do you agree that universities have the same obligation to uphold diversevoices that you might expect of our government? Why or why not?

In my opinion i disagree that university have the same obligation to the goverment. In university student have their own idea of the study, howerevr for the goverment they perfer people have same idea. It is easy for the goveronment to contoral and dominate.

America’s most prestigious university. And, like other great universities, it lies at the heart of the Ameri-
can experiment in democracy.

reference

Bloomberg, M. (May, 2014). On the Repression of Free Expression (from Commencement Speech at Harvard University)

Feb 22 2017 Run Sentence

Exercise

Identify the error type of the following sentences as run-on (R), comma splice (CS), or correct (C). Then correct the sentences.

1) The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school, they make us unique. Type_R___

_The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school; they make us unique.

2) What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere they would get left behind. Type_R__

What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere; they would get left behind.

3) The chickens bring laughter to our students, without them we’d be an ordinary school. Type_R_

The chickens bring laughter to our students; without them we’d be an ordinary school.

4) I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately, I stepped on the chickens’ dump. Type__R_

I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore unfortunately; I stepped on the chickens’ dump.

5) Right now there many chickens living freely on campus but many professors don’t want chickens. Type_CS___

Right now, there many chickens living freely on campus but many professors don’t want chickens.

6) Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they cause

stinky odors make noise and no one wants to clean after. Type__CS

Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they cause

stinky odors make noise, and no one wants to clean after.

7) Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn they need a place that look clean and have a fresh air therefore they can not take a nap or study. Type_R__

Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn. They need a place that look clean and have a fresh air therefore they can not take a nap or study.

 

8) But I strongly disagree with that opinion, chickens should not be allowed on campus at all. Type_C_

 

9) During the time students are in the lab if the chickens make a lot a noise the students won’t focus to do their job. Type_R

During the time students are in the lab if the chickens make a lot a noise; the students won’t focus to do their job.

10) In conclusion, if the chickens live freely on campus because students let them live free then these students should clean the chickens mess. Type_CS__

In conclusion, if the chickens live freely on campus because students let them live free, then these students should clean the chickens mess.

essay one free writing

Different people have different accent and culture. When the two communicating parties use a Shared mother tongue communication, the cultural factors of barrier function may appear. The influence of cultural factors of language communicative meaning is multifaceted. T Nowadays, English is becoming more and more important to us, if you want to learn English well, first, must understand the culture of the english-speaking countries, the language and culture, has the close relation, English teaching should focus on the relationship between language and culture, attach importance to the transmission of cultural knowledge, promote the students to better learn English well.

Feb3 In-class Writing

A man open his mouse, his eyes brows to others. He breath heavy and anytime he will

First I met social media is when I was 15 years old. I have my first smart phone. It is a black iPhone 4. I learn that how to download the apps and I know that everyone use WeChat(a social media app that context with each other like Message). WeChat is so hot and popular in China until now. At that time my mom wake me up is not by knock my door. She wake me up by send me WeChat. Then I found that all of my family members use WeChat, From my grandfather to my young sister. Now I use WeChat communicate with my mom everyday and sometimes I send video call to her. Until I have to check my WeChat before wakeup and go to sleep. I truly believe that I can not live without WeChat. Now it has a now function called “friend circle”. It like Facebook. People can post their daily life on that. Share some short videos and pictures. Others can “Like” it and commend it. Otherwise WeChat change my life in academic study. We created a group discussion of “Rhet-106” class, almost all the student in the group. We remand each others do their homework and do not late for the class. Recently there are some new founction of WeChat is WeChat Pay. People can pay many things by using WeChat Pay. The way people can scan qr code with money on trading with merchants. This is a function of an extremely convenient, saves time also won’t lose the cash. People can go out without using cash!

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