In-class Writing 03/24/2017q

After I reread my first essay and read all the comment for it, I found that I worked well on talking about the culture differences and telling my improvement on learning skills, and also I am very glad that my pics made great visuals.

However, there are also a lot of aspects that I can progress, which are that I could write done more examples for my changes and it would make my essay to be more specific and changing the order of the examples and ideas would also make the essay to be more clear.

In the other hand, I found that I had a lot of run-on sentences and punctuation problems. Thus, I might need to fix them later.

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