May 1st/ ideas about essay#4

I want to talk about I Want A Wife so much. Because it related in some phenomenons in China. Some uneducated people ask women to do everything for their family and they don’t agree with that women have contributed a lot. It makes me feel angry and sad. Even though that my family don’t agree with this statement, I have heard a lot tragedy about this: many women are treat unfairly. So I want to talk about this a lot.

 

May 1st

Reality shows are some of the best shows on television.

  • Reality shows which depict life and people so actual are some of the best shows on television to arouse people’s interaction.

A successful marriage requires patience, good communication, and a sense of humor.

  • A successful marriage which can lead the couples to be better people requires patience, good communication, and a sense of humor.

There have been too many budget cuts at this university.

  • There have been too many budget cuts at this university for decorations and meals.

If you have time on your hands, do community volunteer work.

  • If you have leisure time on your hands and have no idea what to do, then do community volunteer work which can benefit your kindness, organization and you can help people a lot.

Even though I didn’t make the Olympic ski team, my years of train taught me important skills, such as discipline, time management, focus, and persistence.

  • Even though I didn’t make the Olympic ski team, my years of train taught me important skills which benefit my whole life, such as discipline, time management, focus, and persistence.