After I read Irving’s response and Maggie’s response, I can see that Irving has summarized all filmily situations appeared in this essay and it helps me to recall the content of the essay very well. Both of they two have experienced to be raised by their grandparents, so in the process of reading their response, I can see the common point between them. Also, as what I talked in my response, it is very usual in China.
After I reread my first essay and read all the comment for it, I found that I worked well on talking about the culture differences and telling my improvement on learning skills, and also I am very glad that my pics made great visuals.
However, there are also a lot of aspects that I can progress, which are that I could write done more examples for my changes and it would make my essay to be more specific and changing the order of the examples and ideas would also make the essay to be more clear.
In the other hand, I found that I had a lot of run-on sentences and punctuation problems. Thus, I might need to fix them later.
Citing different types of sources in APA style
Technology will always change, try to make life easier, o er cool new 7 advances, and be important to a growing society, but it’s just as important not to become dependent on it and rely on it to do things we’ve known how to do for years.
Izzy G.(2015). Technology Taking Over. In R. Atwan (Ed.), American Now:Short readings from recent periodicals（pp.50-52）Boston:Bedford/ St Martin’s.
“Teens aren’t addicted to social media. ey’re addicted to each other,” Boyd says. “ ey’re not allowed to hang out the way you and I did, so they’ve moved it online.”
Clive T.(2015). The Parent Trap: How Teens Lost the Ability to Socialize. Chapter:Social Media: What Do We Gain? What Do We Lose? In R. Atwan(Ed.), American Now: Short readings from recent periodicals（pp.55-56）Boston:Bedford/ St Martin’s.
1️⃣.Free writing for second essay
I would love to choose the essay that we read on Feb 1st and Feb 3rd, which are:
(1.)Yzzy Gonzalez’s essay “Technology Taking Over?” (pp. 50-52)
(2.)Clive Thompson’s essay “The Parent Trap: How Teens Lost the Ability to Socialize” (pp.55-56)
During my essay, I would love to introduce both essays’ content at first:
The first essay is talking about how technology changes teenagers life now. As the author said, technology around us and change our life in every part. Our sleep can be estimated by the smart alarm, we can cook food easily, we can use Ebook, we can use phone to choose food delivery, we can do almost everything by technology.
Also, the second essay pointed out another side about technology that parents may think that technology limits teenagers face-to-face ability. But actually, the truth is not like this. The reason why parent think that children’s social abilities have been limited is that they don’t chase after technology as their kids and they are the real reason why children don’t have enough time to have social abilities.
After I talk all of these content and ideas, I’d love to point out my own view that technology can really help our life, and it’s becoming a new culture in different country. To use it to benefit daily life is such a great thing for human: we can save a plenty of time with using technology positively. Also, to use different APPs in different country can get different effect. In conclusion, I would love to talk 3 angles about: benefits of technology; management of technology; process with using technology.
2️⃣.General ideas and outline
Topic: technology is around human’s life and it changes human’s work, but we also need to learn to manage it and solve some problems with it.
1. technology changes human’s life a lot, no matter from the way to work or keep daily life or socialize with others (support: use the first essay as evidence and talk about daily life in China)
2.talk some argument about using technology: some people may be tech-addicted and people should learn to control it(support : some report about tech-addicted)
3.people who are not as latest as the technology would not agree with new lifestyle, but I claim that they should try to chase the development of human and then they can learn more and more (support:use the second essay as evidence to talk that parents haven’t correctly recognize the benefits of technology and they cannot figure out what’s their educational problem due to this )
Yarly to Irving’s response.
After I reading Irving’s respond for discussion today, I found that he used some of my jokes as example. It does exists in our daily life, people from other provinces may say:” people from Yunnan are so barbarous and they all trade drugs with Myanmar.” Thus, we would always use these folks as jokes. But after I reading his article, I found that he is complaining and not thinking it’s funny, so I would not joke that way anymore and I don’t want him to joke that way either.Moreover, I have never been to Xi’an and I have also heard about the fake scenery-spot news. I hope that Irving didn’t go to fake ones. In addition, I am wondering how food there is?
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El Paso is located in the far western corner of the United States of Texas State, which also near Mexico. El Paso means ‘the pass ‘ in Spanish’. Also El Paso has a transitional climate between cold dessert climate and hot desert climate with hot summers, usually with little humidity, and mild, dry winters. It was a part of Mexico, but after the Texas Revolution, it became a part of the United States.
Franklin Mountains State Park is the largest urban park in the U.S and the park lies entirely in El Paso; and also there is volcano nearby. So El Paso is also a well-known tourism city. Since the city is also mixed with immigrants, the culture there is also various.
Thinking critically after reading:
Question: Do you agree that universities have the same obligation to uphold diverse voices that you might expect of our government? Why or why not?
I agree that universities have the same obligation to uphold diverse voices that you might expect of our government.
First of all, I claim that we should talk about the role and the obligation of universities. Michael Bloomberg have expressed his view about this from Commencement Speech at Harvard University in 2014 “The role of universities is not to promote an ideology. It is to provide scholars and students with a neutral forum for researching and debating issues—without tipping the scales in one direction, or repressing unpopular views.”（33rd paragraph）. I cannot agree the idea more, In university, the scholars are not teaching students ways to solve problems, but to provide a environment that can help them develop themselves from debating. It is not about helping them what to do, but about how to figure out all their confusions.
Also, for the obligation of the government, it absolutely needs various voices. For example, when members from different parties are debating, they would try to convince the opposite and also they would improve themselves from it. Listening from the other side can be really beneficial and progressive.
Therefore, I think the obligations of universities and government are in common and I agree with the state that universities have the same obligation to uphold diverse voices that you might expect of our government.
Identify the error type of the following sentences as run–on (R), comma splice (CS), or
The connotations that Hughes uses to characterize the word black is that individuals use the color to express some unlucky matters. There are dozens examples.
- a black cat meaning bad luck.
a black-list on which you get if you don’t vote right.
when lodges come into being, the folks they didn’t want in them got black-balled
kept a skeleton in your closet, you might get black-mailed
When it came down to the unlucky ball on the pool table, the eight- rock, they made it the black ball
illegally, they said you were trading on the black market.
a gangster, the Black Hand Society may take you for a ride.
if you don’t behave your- self, your family will say you’re a black sheep
if your mama burns a black candle to change the family luck, they call it black magic. /If she had, that would have been a black mark against her.
- We claim that foreign speakers can understand parts of the connotations, but not all of them.
Group members: Yarly Liang, Huimin Lee, Irving Hu.