___N__Ellis (2011) argues that world problems are caused by overpopulation and that the only possible solution is an enforced tax on families who have more than one child (p. 23). (The way he claims his statement and cite it is wrong)
Alaska’s wetlands provide many benefits including: food and habitat for wildlife, fish and
shellfish species, natural products for human use and subsistence, shoreline erosion and
sediment control, flood protection, and opportunities for recreation and esthetic appreciation.
Hall, Jonathan V., W. E. Frayer, and Bill O. Wilen.Status of Alaska Wetlands.4 Nov. 1997.Web. 12 Mar. 2011.
Alaskan wetlands offer advantages such as erosion and flood control, homes and food for
wildlife, and natural beauty and products for humans’ benefit. (no citation)
Assertive individuals tend to feel more in control of their lives, derive more satisfactions from
their relationships and achieve their goals more often. They also will obtain more respect from, and inspire confidence in, those with whom they interact since they tend to be viewed as strong characters who will not be easily swayed.
Hargie, O., Saunders, C., & Dickson, D. (2000).Social Skills in Interpersonal Communication.London: Routledge,p. 271.
Because they are not readily influenced, assertive people gain respect from others, and they
experience success in guiding their own lives, nurturing good relationships, and achieving
their goals (Hargie, Saunders, and Dickson, 2000, p. 271). (you can’t start a sentence with because and he uses the same words)
A new to recycle bald tires has been developed by researchers at the University of Georgia
Agricultural Experiment Station. Instead of hanging them on trees as swings, they’re using
them as mulch around the base.
“Tires Return as Mulch.”Popular Mechanics 94.2 (2000): 22. LEXIX-NEXIS. Web. 31 July 2011.
A Popular Mechanics article notes that University of Georgia researchers have found a new
use for worn tires: instead of having them on trees as swings, they’re using them as mulch
(“Tires Return”). (No citation)