After reading Abhiraj’s reading response, I saw that his was an assessment of how the essay is structured, and a summary of the essay that specifically focuses on Pengfei’s increased quality of schooling as his family moved up the social ladder while he grew up. I also wrote about Pengfei’s growing up during Chinas increasing access to technology and western ideas, but I like how Abhiraj integrated his examples and evidence more than I did. Something I learned from his response I didn’t realize the importance or significance of the visual imagery in the essay until Abiraj pointed it out. I think that Abhiraj could give a little more context to his background information and summary; like stating the title of the essay and its authors, but besides that, I think that his response follows the guidelines pretty well.