3/9: Sentence Variety and Combination [Group Blog Writing]

Group Members: Briana Do, AJ Corral, Izabella Williams

  1. The reality show follows the lives of Bruce and Kris Jenner’s combined family. Most of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughters, Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé Kardashian. 
    • The reality show follows the lives of Bruce and Kris Jenner´s combined family, but most of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughters, Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé Kardashian.
  2. Bruce Jenner was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics. His sons from a previous marriage, Brandon and Brody, have also appeared on their own reality shows.
    • Bruce Jenner, father of reality stars Brandon and Brody, was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics. 
  3. The Kardashians’ father, the late attorney Robert Kardashian, was famous for representing O. J. Simpson. His daughters gained recognition as American socialites.
    • The Kardashians’ father, the late attorney Robert Kardashian, was famous for representing O. J. Simpson; his daughters gained recognition as American socialites. 
  4. Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex- tape scandal and resulting Playboy appearance. The Kardashian fame grew into a profitable reality series. 
    • Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex- tape scandal and resulting Playboy appearance; the Kardashian fame then grew into a profitable reality series. 
  5. The show depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians. Spin- off shows feature Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques. 
    • The show depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians; the spin- off shows feature Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques. 
  6. The Kardashians’ behavior at first seemed outrageous. They are a loving family.
    • The Kardashians’ behavior seemed outrageous at first, but they are a loving family. 
  7. The Kardashians squabble like typical siblings. Kris, the mother, holds the family together. 
    • The Kardashians squabble like typical siblings, but their mother, Kris, holds the family together.
  8. Kim’s $ 10 million wedding to pro basketball player Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen by an estimated 10.5 million viewers. The marriage lasted only 72 days.
    • Kim’s $10 million wedding to pro basketball player Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen by an estimated 10.5 million viewers, yet the marriage lasted only 72 days.

 

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