Rinto

• he brought his personal experience related to the article
• it would be nice to have in text citation
• he summarized well of the main point and supported well by dividing to a few points in the article

Zushan

• He summarized well of the main point of the article by using some key words
• did not provide his personal experience and in text citation, so it would be nice to have one

Reflecting on my essay 2, I did not do a great job of citation (APA format) and logos argument (needed to make more explanation in detail). Therefore, I dropped couple points from those, so I will work on this in order to get a better point. I also need to add two more articles that can prove my idea as well.