Speech Feedback
Janelle suggested I format my speech better and use a powerpoint as a visual aid. I have ethos to my speech but will still require sources to back up my argument.
Group writing on the blog and presentation
https://www.americanrhetoric.com/MovieSpeeches/moviespeechlegallyblonde.html
| Professor Stromwell: I am, personally, very honored to introduce this year’s class-elected speaker. After getting off to a quite interesting start here at Harvard, she graduates today with an invitation to join one of Boston’s most prestigious law firms. I am sure we are going to see great things from her. Ladies and Gentlemen: Elle Woods. |
Evaluation:
Professor Stormwell gives the opening to the speech by introducing Elle Woods Professor Stromwell: I am, personally, very honored to introduce this year’s class-elected speaker. After getting off to a quite interesting start here at Harvard, she graduates today with an invitation to join one of Boston’s most prestigious law firms. I am sure we are going to see great things from her. Ladies and Gentlemen: Elle Woods.
“Well, no offense to Aristotle, but in my three years at Harvard I have come to find that passion is a key ingredient to the study and practice of law — and of life.”
First impressions are not always correct Have faith in yourself
Ethos and Pathos
It is with passion, courage of conviction, and strong sense of self that we take our next steps into the world, remembering that first impressions are not always correct. You must always have faith in people. And most importantly, you must always have faith in yourself. |