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November 22: Semicolons and Colons

My group member were Jack and Nate:

  1. White rhinos are famous for their big horns; they are among the endangered species.
  2. The teacher didn’t know if she should laugh or cry, but she knew it was quite hilarious.
  3. Three things matter in life: perseverance, commitment, and aptitude for learning.
  4. A dog trotted over to the computer in Sara’s office, typed out a perfect letter, and printed it!
  5. The manager was stunned, but she told the dog: “The sign says you have to be good with the computer. Just because you’re good at typing doesn’t mean that you are good with it.”
  6. A man walked into a pet shop and ordered three things: a centipede, a kitten, and a parrot.
  7. Sama was the best person for the job because she had an excellent service record in one key area: community health training.
  8. Amy served with 4 stars in the army; therefore, she was awarded the Medal of Honor.

 

Rhetorical Analysis

Emma Gonzalez uses a lot of pathos in her speech by humanizing the victims of the shooting. She calls them by their names and also describes the types of activities they used to do, which are the things normal high schoolers do. This makes the audience feel her pain as she knew these people on a personal level and they will no longer be able to continue to do these things. Humanizing the victims further drives home the point that they were innocent kids just minding their business.

By naming the victims and describing them as people, she further booths her ethos as someone who survived the shooting. What she says is credible about the effects of gun violence as she herself has experienced it and has lost friends and peers. The pausing and timing of six minutes and twenty seconds logically shows how guns can change people’s lives so drastically in just a short amount of time.

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