After reviewing the feedback that I have received on my essay 2, I have concluded some of my strengths and my weaknesses. Some of my weaknesses are that I need to work on providing more information about my source and why I believed it to be reliable. I also need to work on remembering to add an end quote. One of my strengths was how I connected my writing to my own personal experience. I also think that I did a good job analyzing the effective appeals to the audience. In the future, I plan on continuing to show strength in my analysis while working on improving my errors. To improve my errors, I plan on referring back to my last essay’s comments when editing my next essay.