After I read the feedback of my second essay, I realized some points that I could improve in your future writing.

First, I made some mistakes about comma, which means I need to place a comma after some words.

Secondly, I need prove more specific exams from some texts to support the rhetorical appeals, and pay attention to critique the logical weakness in the articles.

Finally, it’s about the effectiveness of the overall argument of this article, which means I need to summarize the full text and the argument in a comprehensive way.

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