After reading the feedback of Essay 2, I realize I have something needs to improve. First, I did not give a clear publisher and publish location of the article I used. Second, I did not use APA in-text citations and references correctly. Third, I did not give a clear statement for some of my points. But I believe I did a good job on connecting ideas between the article and my own experiences. I think I can improve these problems by doing a better organization.