November 6th

  • In the first point I should have used a better thesis stating how both authors use different but similar ways to describe their poverty.
  • Another thing that I should’ve have added were a few more outside resources.
  • My transitions should have been a little more creative as I only used a basic one.
  • I used in text citations but not all over the essay which is one more thing I should’ve done.

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