15th November

 

One of the most historically significant event was when the United Arab Emirates discovered oil in 1958 and how they joined states a few years later. At that point of time UAE was just made out of many different villages.

Nowadays a popular place you may know in the UAE is called Dubai at that time all the seven emirates were divided and nearly 15 years later joined and decided to name the country UAE and naming its capital city Abu Dhabi.No one expected such rapid growth as UAE became one of the most popular places to go visit as they had built a whole modern city on top of a desert in just 50 years.

Each state in the UAE had it’s own ruler but an over all ruler had to be appointed at the time and Sheikh Zayed bin Sultan Al Nahyan was appointed to rule over the country as he was the one who convinced all seven states to create what is now know as the United Arab Emirates.

8th November

So what does my family structure look like? Let me tell you it’s not too complicated but has been based through traditional and religious thoughts. In my family everyone who has married someone has had a arranged marriage and which is a concept that has been shown in today’s reading . Most of my family are pretty chilled out and modern though they allow me to make my own decision but in my family my dad usually makes a lot of the important decisions but my mom is also involved in those decisions. My family is probably what you would call a modern Indian/Arab family.

November 6th

  • In the first point I should have used a better thesis stating how both authors use different but similar ways to describe their poverty.
  • Another thing that I should’ve have added were a few more outside resources.
  • My transitions should have been a little more creative as I only used a basic one.
  • I used in text citations but not all over the essay which is one more thing I should’ve done.

28th October

As I read my peer Ivan’s essay I noticed a few common things such as how he mentions the emotions and problems the author might have felt as he was growing up. He also talks about how understanding the Chinese history very important to which I agree with him as most of us do not know what has happened in China and another key thing that he used was pathos which I found to be unique and haven’t seen in most people’s essays.

 

 

Why you should choose management ?

What is management and how do you use it ?

Are there Jobs based for management ?

Is USF good for management?

21st October Huzaifa and Ivan

The video has good affects such as: good music that underlines her words, atmosphere and meaning of her words; effective pictures that also effect our emotions; adorable and innocent stuff that she is using in her essay in order to say what is she kind of a person and what does she live for because the best moments in our life, that’s a thing what we live for.

We liked this video and we think it is perfect and we have no concerns to it. The pictures, videos, music and transactions between them are perfect.

21st October

After reading the essay prompt I think these three are the most compelling features of the video essay. First I think talking about each ones major is interesting as those who do not know what major to choose might be interested in one of the major’s another student is doing and is able to understand fully about the major after the video essay.Another key feature of this essay is the fact that one person may be able to improve his/her writing and learn different techniques on how to build a video essay. Three things that are required for the essay are sources, be clear and uses effective ways to show your essay, and at last make an outline.

October 2nd Huzaifa Ivan

1) The chickens on campus play a famous role for our school; they make us unique.
Type_CS___
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2) What if the chickens laid eggs and hid them somewhere, they would get left behind.
Type_R___
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3) The chickens bring laughter to our students, without them we’d be an ordinary
school. Type___CS_
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4) I remember, after my first class I was leading out to the bookstore. Unfortunately, I
stepped on the chickens’ dump. Type_CS___
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5) Right now there many chickens living freely on campus, but many professors don’t
want chickens. Type__R__
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6) Chickens should not be allowed to live freely on the campus because they cause
stinky odors, make noise, and no one wants to clean after. Type___CS_
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7) Anytime students want to lie down on the lawn they need a place that looks clean and
has fresh air ,therefore, they can not take a nap or study. Type_R___
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8) I strongly disagree with that opinion. chickens should not be allowed on campus
at all.
Type__CS_
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9) During the time students are in the lab, if the chickens make a lot of noise, the students
won’t focus to do their job. Type_CS___
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10) In conclusion, if the chickens live freely on campus because students let them live
free then these students should clean the chickens mess. Type_C___
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September 30th Huzaifa Ivan yijie

_Yes because wikipedia is an unreliable source_and she needs to you use sources that are linked in Wikipedia__ 1. Kyoko needs to write a report on American politics. She looks up Barack Obama in Wikipedia and discovers he is the 44th president of the United States. She includes this information in her report but doesn’t mention Wikipedia.
__Yes even though the whole class is doing the novel it is considered plagiarism if the writer does not cite his information ___2. Tam is writing a paper on a novel for his English class. Since the whole class is reading
the same book, he doesn’t need to use a citation.
___No because he is_using his own History paper _3. Sugi wrote a paper for his European history class last semester and got an A on the
paper. This semester, his Political Science class is addressing some of the same issues that are in
his History paper. He checks with
his professor first who agrees with Sugi, so he uses the
material from his History paper.
__Yes but they have to cite and it can’t be the exact same words as the internet___4. Ramiro, Stephan, April, and Chris are working on a group project. Chris submits his
work and the others suspect that some of it came from the Internet, but
it sounds good, so they
submit it.
___No it is nit because Maria changed her wording and hasn’t copied anything from the Internet__5. Maria finds a lot of good information for her paper on the Internet. She carefully
changes the wording and prepares a good paraphrase. She doesn’t copy anything verbatim.
B.
Directions: Decide whether the inform
ation described in each scenario will
require
citation of the source (Y or N) and explain why.
____Yes because even though it is from the same author you must cite each piece of new information you’re using_1. You clearly identify the source at the beginning of a paragraph that summarizes the
author’s ideas about teenage drinking. Since readers will naturally
assume all of the ideas in
the paragraph are from the source, no additional citation is necessary.
_No because it is common knowledge and it does not need. to be cited____2. In your paper on the history of aviation you state the date of the Wright brothers’ first
successful flight at Kitty Hawk.
_It has to be cited because he has copied the information so he has to cite it____3. In a paper on
the civil rights movement you find some general, well known background information in an encyclopedia. It is obviously common knowledge, so you copy the
information and include it in your paper.
____No because you are getting the information directly from the speaker _4. You ask your mother about the steps she went throu
gh in obtaining a bank load for a
new car. You include this information in your paper.
_Yes because he got his information from the book so it must be cited____5. You skim a 325
page book entitled
Using the Internet. A major theme throughout the
book is that the Internet is an important technological achievement. You include this in your
paper.
___Yes as you are using information from another person and this must be cited__6. You find an article that takes the same position you have taken on the subject of gun
control. To save time you summarize in your paper a portion of the argument from the article,
since the author’s ideas are identical to
your own.

September 27th Huzaifa and Yijie

1. The reality show follows the lives of Bruce and Kris Jenner’s combined family and most
of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughters, Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé
Kardashian.
2. Bruce Jenner was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in
the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics and his sons from a previous marriage, Brandon and
Brody, have also appeared on their own reality shows.
3. The Kardashians’ father, the late attorney Robert Kardashian, was famous for
representing O. J. Simpson therefore his daughters gained recognition as American socialites.
4. Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex- tape scandal and resulting
Playboy appearance and the Kardashian fame grew into a profitable reality series.
5. The show depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians although Spin- off shows feature
Kourtney, Kim, and Khloé’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques.
6. The Kardashians’ behavior at first seemed outrageous but they are a loving family.
7. Although the Kardashians squabble like typical siblings,Kris, the mother, holds the family
together.
8. Kim’s $ 10 million wedding to pro basketball player Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen
by an estimated 10.5 million viewers but the marriage lasted only 72 days.