Strengths

  • ethos
  • having outside supporting sources
  • After reading the comments, I am able to support my essay with good ethos and outside supporting arguments. I plan on continuing these helpful methods for my essays to continue to grow as I also improve on my weaknessʻs along the way.

Weakness

  • Do you have any specific examples from the article to show this?
  • References? Please see APA Sample Paper under Week Eight Module for examples to do this section correctly.
  • After reading the feedback within the margins, I noticed that I need to improve on major details on the structure that makes a good essay. I am able to come up with reasoning for certain details that help me improve my writing, however, it is not enough because I need evidence from an article for logos to be a strong suit in my writing. I also need to work on my referencing because in my essay it was not in the proper format.
  • I need to improve on these key details immediately because it is essential to have these for a good essay