After reading Mr. Tika’s comments, I realised that my strengths are summarising and synthesizing, I will continute to maintain quality in these two essay writing skills for more effecvtive responses/essays in the future. Organization of essay was not done effectively, the rerason for this, in my opinion, is that there was lot of content I was working with, however with the mindset of learning from all mistakes, I will take this as a positive takeaway as I learned that the way I organised the essay was not effective, and will make sure essays/responses are organised more effectively, with more attention. My essay also lacked references top outside research, which aid to make the essay more argumentative/informative, I will add two or more outside references to my essays/responses to persuade the audience more effectively.