04/05/2022 Revised Argument Outline

I think i’m going to do my speech on the water issue and facility issue for Gillson hall. I’m so passionate about it because I live in Gillson and it had genuinely, thoroughly put such a damper on my experience here. It is not just facilities that has been an issue, also the staff, however I think for my speech I should just focus on how management and facility quality can improve. My group members Lauren and Celeste already had extensive outlines so their examples helped me out alot.

Here is a very tentative outline:

  • Intro/overall negative experience in Gillson
  • Hot water, and complete water outage
    • probably need to find out what water company usf employs
  • Laundry machines breaking everyday
    • maybe evidence with other colleges having water and/or laundry machine issues.
  • Facilities management
  • CA management
    • maybe talk about a plan for overnight emergencies
    • primary source evidence from floormates on how hostile some Gillson staff are unprovoked
  • Institutional responsibilities
    • basically talking about how able and facility staff are often kicked to the curb, treated badly, and not paid nearly enough.
  • Conclusion-wrapping up the speech by talking about how the solution has to be a combination of simple fixes, management improvements, and institutional changes.