The write-out that Sam completed for his speech had strong topical and narrative aspects to it. I feel that it could be more organized or effective if it was put into a causal manner. He spoke of Critical Mass which was a bike event in the community filled with thousands of people in the bike community. If the write-out was organized in a causal manner, the topic of the event could be driven and further explained not only more about the event, but what is the cause of it and why does it take place. Addressing the topic this way could make the topic seem more interesting or draw in the audience with a strong interest in the event.
