I think that for the first run through my speech, I did an okay job. I think it would be best for me to memorize some more of the key points of my speech like the names of the tribe so that it would be much smoother when I am addressing them. I also believe that I could get more into the fact that this is a problem of discrimination and that I can fight for the minorities. Overall, I felt that this was a good run through with lots of room for improvement.
