Change the steortype from others to Shanghainese

People who are Chinese was not local Shanghainese had a lot of sterotypes to Shanghainese

1. To be a 20 years Shanghainese I felt everyone from other provience in China have a bad impression to us. (Credit and attention getter.)
2. Everytime my other Chinese friend asked me “Where are you from?” Me “Shanghai!” Very proud, international city, morden, fashion, advanced, very proud. Others was like “You must be hate me.”
3. Nowadays Shanghainese have more negetive impression. Such as Shanghai “celebrities”, and “Jiang Zhe Hu” wear.

To change these sterotypes and let others understand more about Shanghainese arts and humanities, I interviewed a kind of person can be most representative Shanghai, this kind people was called “Old Color”.

The thing I feel shame to my country is the “Event of Heaven Palace” happened during 1989/4/15 to 1989/6/4.

At the beginning the students just want to mouring a leader, and they wanted free speech in China. Millions of students waited before the Heave Palace for the government speak to them. The government think their behavior is reactionary.

In 1989/6/4, the government shot the citizens I have never haerd about a government use army to shot their citizens. And this is a forbiden topic in China, in my generation we’ve never heard about anythng about this event.

According to my partner Abby, she said that she was interested in the rhetrical analysis that Dick Gregory use in the Shame. For me, I got the similar experience with the author.

In my middle school, I also met a mean irresponsibility advisor. Just because I did not get a high grades in her class, so she always suppress me in front of the whole class. I was lucky that I only study in that school for only half year, then I moved to a school which teachers leading students patiently.

I was shame not on me, but shame on those person who don’t have ability to teach students, lead students moving forward are still working on the seat as a teacher. They don’t know what they do will bring to the student, and I also feel sad for those students who don’t have chance to get a better teacher.

Group member: Aditiya Chris Feng Ruki

The next outbreak? We are not ready.

It was a speech presented by Bill Gates. At the beginning of the speech, he pushed out a barrel to make an attention getter. A good attention getter could make the audience quickly get into the topic and get the main idea aboout the speech.

At the same time, he didn’t use a lot of academic vocabularies which make the audiences easy to understand everything he said without a huge knowledge reserve.

Also, he got a clear structure and his powerpoint explained every key point detailed.

In Ori’s discussion, he mentioned about the most effective presentation are Juliana’s and Martin Luther King’s.

Both of these two essay used pathos. The first one the writer talked about in her chidhood she don’t speak the same language as her mother’s do. And in Martin Luther King’s speech, he tried to convince the audience to raise above racial’s obstacles that were common in that era.

In Zhiheng’s discussion he metioned about his best friend, which is also my friend —- Dion. Dion was born in American, but his parents let him study in China at first. After he finished his middle school, his parents moved him back to American. At the beginning, he felt that all the thing he familiar with are all gone, but he tried his best to get into the society and practice English. Zhiheng said that he is admire that Dion can speak both English and Chinese like his mother language.

Ori Chris Ruki

A

___N__ 1. Kyoko needs to write a report on American politics. She looks up Barack Obama in Wikipedia and discovers he is the 44th president of the United States. She includes this information in her report but doesn’t mention Wikipedia.

Kyoko used facts. So it is not.

___Y__2. Tam is writing a paper on a novel for his English class. Since the whole class is reading the same book, he doesn’t need to use a citation.

Because Tam didn’t cite, when he wrote a paper on someone else’s novel. Even though when everybody reads, he still needst to use the citation.

___N__3. Sugi wrote a paper for his European history class last semester and got an A on the paper. This semester, his Political Science class is addressing some of the same issues that are in his History paper. He checks with his professor first who agrees with Sugi, so he uses the material from his History paper.

He use his own paper, so it’s not padrarism. 

___Y__4. Ramiro, Stephan, April, and Chris are working on a group project. Chris submits his work and the others suspect that some of it came from the Internet, but it sounds good, so they submit it.

They are copying Chris’ work on the interenet without cute it.

___Y__5. Maria finds a lot of good information for her paper on the Internet. She carefully changes the wording and prepares a good paraphrase. She doesn’t copy anything verbatim.

Information is also belongs to someone else.

B

__Y___1. You clearly identify the source at the beginning of a paragraph that summarizes the author’s ideas about teenage drinking. Since readers will naturally assume all of the ideas in the paragraph are from the source, no additional citation is necessary.

Even though you identify the source, still have to cite the source when you use it.

__N___2. In your paper on the history of aviation you state the date of the Wright brothers’ first successful flight at Kitty Hawk.

This is the fact, date does irnecessary to be cited.

___N__3. In a paper on the civil rights movement you find some general, well-known background information in an encyclopedia. It is obviously common knowledge, so you copy the information and include it in your paper.

It is gennally well common knowledge.

___N__4. You ask your mother about the steps she went through in obtaining a bank load for a new car. You include this information in your paper.

Because you are just taking notes for yourslef.

___N__5. You skim a 325-page book entitled Using the Internet. A major theme throughout the book is that the Internet is an important technological achievement. You include this in your paper.

It is so general. A lot of people awaring this fact.

__Y___6. You find an article that takes the same position you have taken on the subject of gun control. To save time you summarize in your paper a portion of the argument from the article, since the author’s ideas are identical to your own.

You summarize some argument from other people still need citation.

I was looking for an artice about Chinese children’s idols are video game stars, not Messi or Ronald. In the article, the author mentions about the phenomenon of Chinese kids using electronic stuff and showed the disadvantage of the law for under18 teenagers for playing video games. On the otherside the Chinese E-sport is quickly rising up.

In Lacrosse: Technique and Tradition, David Pietramala shows that “Hopkins is looks for great athelates have speed, quickness, agility, size, strength, and also intangable qualities including sportsmansship, leadership and character.” For those tangiable qualities it is directly perceived through the scence to see the player’s talents and skills. But the intangable qualities are as important as the tangiable qualities. For my personal experience, I joined the Lacrosse oof my high-school was because my leardership. In the team sports game especially for sports like lacrosse including 10 players on for each side, teamwork is the most important point to win the game. I was recruited in the team because the coach wanted me to condesation the whole team.

David Pietramala (2016). Lacrosse: technique and tradition.

Ruki Zhao;Feng Lin;Jie Shi

 

A man from the city came to visit a small farm,and he saw a farmer feeding pigs in a very strange way. The farmer would lift a pig up to a nearby apple tree, so the pig would eat the apples directly off the tree. The farmer would move the pig from one apple to another until the pig was full, and then he would start again with another pig.

The man from the city was pretty puzzled, so he watched for quiet a while, and finally said, “What a strange way to feed pigs! It’s a waste of time! You could save a whole lot of time if you just shook the apples off the tree and let the pigs eat them from the ground!” The farmer looked puzzled and replied, “What’s time to a pig?”

A young man was waiting in line at the bank.He developed a loud case of hiccups and got worse and worse. By the time he got to the teller’s window,but  he couldn’t hardly talk, so he handed the teller his check to cash.

The teller tapped numbers into the computer. In a moment she looked up and frown. “I can’t cash your check.” she said.

The man was shocked. “Why not?” he asked.

“The computer indicates you do not have sufficient funds to cover this amount.” she said. “In fact our records show that your account is overdrawn by more than $5000.00.”

“It can’t be!” cried the man. “You’ve got to be kidding!”

“You’re right. I am.” she smiled. She started counting out his cash. “You will notice that your hiccups are gone, though!”

Source: M. S. Samston (2005)