I read Ruby Gilles readers response and found that we got the mail idea that the story should the difference in the cultures in each home. We also found that the story being told in broken english made us feel like we were there.

This writing was different from a traditional essay because the language wasn’t perfect. Usually when writing we are focused on our grammar and if we are understandable. Making the story be told in a voice of someone that doesn’t speak english perfectly actually helps the reader be more involved into the story in this writing.

Free writing; Essay 3

ideas to do it on

abortion rights; Rapest gets to sue women if she aborts her baby.

homeless; Why they are so many homeless, how to solve this problem.

Gun laws; why are people with mental health issues owning guns? Need better background checks

Police brutality; Training for police and background checks, people shouldn’t be police officers if they have a past in racism or make racist remarks. People shouldn’t be police if they first response is to pull out their gun. George Floyd killed by past coworker. The police officer was a security guard and he was known for being very quick to pull out a taser and result to violence when something startled him.