What l want to talk about is the economic reform and open up back then in 1978 in China, this reform has shaped China’s economy and made remarkable progress in different fields. This is so far I think it is the biggest change that China’s has made over the past.
- More specific in detail to support my points.
- Give more examples to support my idea and claim
- Focus on several aspects of the argument, such as ethos, pathos and logos with relevant examples from the text.
This video demonstrates what a good presentation should be like, such as eye contact with the audience, hand movements to attract the audience’s attention, and the speaker shows his confidence while presenting the powerpoint. He really likes to engage with the audience and keep them on track.
Edit the following paragraph to correct unnecessary shifts in verb tense: For example: Marie finds bottles on old farmland, where she liked (likes) to explore.
For a long time, my stepson, Jonathan, was unhappy to have me as part of his family, for he resents that he didn’t have both biological parents at home. I tried to get to know him better, but he would complain that I invaded his privacy. As a newcomer, I understand that our relationship will require effort from both of us. It is not enough that I was friendly. Jonathan also has to want us to be friends, and I was not happy with the two of us being strangers, but I can wait for him to feel more comfortable around me.
Anne Marie collected antique bottles and loved to turn them into works of art. She will buy bottles if she likes them, but she prefers to find them on the ground. She will find bottles everywhere, but she picks them selectively. However, she has the best luck at construction sites on old farmland, where she spent most of her time. Often, bottles appeared on the surface after a good rain, but they disappear very soon. She will use special tools for excavating bottles, including a set of brushes. She did not want to break the bottles as she removes them from the ground. After finding a new bottle, Anne Marie will add it to her display case and hung on the wall as an artistic piece (Mangelsdorf, 2013, p. 411).
I think three of the most essential factors of the assignment are a well-organized layout of the video, an interview with a professor in your major and a nice and clear of the recording. The requirement is that the video should be between 3-4 minutes to concisely communicate the main idea, and use different sound and music to represent each part differently.