Essay 1

From the essay 1, Tika’s comments that I should clear who said about that idea and if I have to compare some data I have to make clearly whether I compare in two sample or more than two. Moreover, I have to follow the guidelines properly to make it a good critique. Also, I have some mistakes on my sentences about subject-verb agreement, and plural noun issues. In addition, about references I have to refer every sources which I bring critique on my writing.  So, next writing I need to review again and again before uploading file.

 

 

Eassy2

From the essay 2, Tika’s comments whether I have to make more clearly critique what I mean and what I want to say on the writing. Also I have to specific more what I mean in that sentences. In addition, If I have to say about quote I have to make a clearly which quote I mean. Moreover, I should make more opinion what I agree or disagree in the source which I bring to criticize. Finally, I need to careful about APA format.