Before the meeting, I printed out my outline and write-out, which the coach looked over. After reviewing my speech, we talked about how it related to the audience and how I could better capture their attention. She suggested I change my concluding questions to a stronger ending that would include a restating of the thesis. In addition, advised me to write my speech in more of an outline format, as it would encourage me to make eye contact. Lastly, we talked about my PowerPoint and what to add.