The introduction section in the video recording would help appeal to the audience because the introduction contains the hook, summary, and thesis statement. The introduction not only attracts the audience but also gives an insight into what we want to argue. Visual aids that are not only connected to the essay but also images that will highlight what the author is saying about the topic. Outside sources that are reliable, credible, and, if possible, a known person will strengthen the argument. Life stories that are not only interesting or life-educating but also a story that will dive into your topic. Body posture and eye contact will make the whole speech more interesting and doable.