In the previous essays,  I think I have many places that need to improve and correct; whatever the grammar and the context that I used. I realize there should have more ideas or comments about the resources which I used in the essay, not only the resources from the book or online which without my own idea. For grammar, I always have the issue of verb tenses, such as I used to mixed verb tenses, or missing the conjunction. So I want to give more my own story of learning and focus on the grammar issue which are verb tenses and conjunction to improve my essay 1, and I hope I can make the grade change better after revision.

1.The reality show follows the lives of Bruce and Kris Jenner’s combined family, but most of the episodes focus on the three oldest daughter, Kourtney, Kim, and Khloe kardashian.

2. Bruce Jenner was famous for breaking the world record and winning a gold medal in the decathlon at the 1976 Olympics; his sons from a previous marriage, Brandon and Brody have also appeared on their own reality shows.

3.The Kardashians’ father, the late attorney Robert Kardashian, was famous for representing O. J. Simpson, and his daughters gained recognition as American socialites.

4.Kim came into the national spotlight in 2007 after a sex-tape scandal and resulting and result Playboy appearance, and the Kardashian fame grew into a profitable reality series.

5.The show depict depicts the daily routine of the Kardashians, in addition of spin- off shows feature Kourtney, Kim, and Khloe’s attempts to build their line of fashion boutiques.

6. The Kardashians’ behavior at first seemed outrageous, they are a loving family.

7. The Kardashians squabble like typical siblings, and Kris, the mother, holds the family together.

8. Kim’s $10 million wedding to pro basketball player Kris Humphries in 2011 was seen by an estimated 10.5 million viewers, and the marriage lasted only 72 days.

“My Own Swordsman” is my favorite chinese TV dramas as well as best comedy. It talks about a group of guests from all over the world in a Tong Fu preeminent experience something legendary; some of them know Kung Fu, and some of them good at cooking. Tong Xiangyu is Tong Fu inn-keeper; she is very stingy, and she is beauty and kind-hearted. She leds her staffs throw up many kinds of guests. She is widow and also has great wisdom.