Ailin and Lillah-Aaliyah could both relate to Bich Minh Nguyen’s struggle of finding identity between two different cultures, something that I never experienced, so it was good to see how other people felt about this writing. We all agreed on what Mirando’s argument was, that multiethnic or multiracial youths can struggle to find their identity.
Looking at the feedback on my Essay Two, it is clear that I need to work on my APA in text citations and my references page. I can do this by rewatching the video on APA format, and apply that to my next essay. I could also support my claim by using more evidence and adding more sources.