outline
- introduce the problem (an unreasonable policy, phones will be confiscated if found at school for the entire semester)
- counterclaim: understand why they set such a rule
- 3 points to prove that my new rule is better.
- new phenomenon will appear
- no phone life is hard to lead a normal life
- not helpful for teaching
– conclusion
I chose a speech delivered by Seth Nishiyama and the title was Nap Time. The speech is about how nap time can make you more effective in school or at work. Generally, the way that he introduces the content is easy to understand and follow and also the topic can benefit us, students. His volume is good and his voice is clear. The best part of his speech is gestures and body movements. When he explains how it benefits, he uses his finger to make 1,2,3 to make audience easy to follow. And also he walked to the other side when he goes to the next slide which is very natural and makes audience pay more attention to him.