Class 10 post

While brainstorming in class today, we were instructed to think of a story that related to our community, this is my story.

A community I belong to is people who skateboard in San Francisco. A couple of weeks ago I went skateboarding on the Embarcadero with three friends of mine. There is a small plaza on the Embarcadero that is smooth granite with a couple of ledge features where every weekend a crowd of skateboarders ranging from 5 people to 30 people congregate to skate the plaza and hang out. While hanging out at EMB with my friends, we were approached by another skateboarder and quickly got wrapped up in conversation. We ended up staying on the embarcadero for a long time that day and talked with our new friend for a number of hours. As the topics of conversation shifted I realized that this skateboarder knew one of my friends from home which was completely random because the town I live in is on the complete other side of the country and not to mention my town has less than 5,000 residents. After talking about this for a while, our friend told us a story about he and a couple of his friends went to the famous Humphry Slocombe ice cream shop in the ferry building after skating at EMB and the cashier refused to let them pay because he saw that they skateboarded as well. At the time I remember not thinking much of this story and dismissing it little after he told us. As the day went on we skated until it got dark then decided it was about time to head home but before we left, one of my friends who had been skating during our friend’s story about the free ice cream suggested that we go to Humphry Slocombe before leaving. We packed up our things and skated over to the ferry building where all four of us ordered ice cream but when we tried to pay, the ordinary-looking guy behind the counter refused to take any money we tried to give him. After that we thanked him and went on our way. That is my story about my community.

Class 9 post

In our last class, we talked with Mark Miretsky about the electronic-assist bike share program, Jump, which Mark works at. In our talk we discussed the difficulty in working with a small company that is competing with massive bike shares and also how his company plans for success as they grow in size. Overall I found Mark’s talk very interesting; especially when he discussed the advantages and disadvantages of choosing to develop software over expanding a project’s hardware. For the rest of the class we split up into groups and gave mini presentations which tied Mark’s talk into the assigned reading.

Discussion of Video Rehearsals for Project 1

For our first project, I gave a speech that assessed the credibility of Jay Walder, CEO of Motivate bike share which recently partnered with Ford to produce the Ford Gobike initiative. In all honesty, I pretty much botched my presentation. I went into class feeling confident because when I recorded my three rehearsals they were consistently timed (4:50, 4:44, 4:54) and I was able to clearly articulate everything I wanted to say. One thing I think I was able to do particularly well in my rehearsals was that I was able to elaborate on bullet points and touch on everything I wanted to say while at the same time avoiding reading my script word for word.

Self-Assessment/Reflection for Project 2

Overall, I was very pleased with the speech I gave for our second presentation on analyzing evidence. For me, this speech wasn’t as much about the content of the speech rather than my articulation of points and confidence. In my last presentation, I thought that I struggled to connect with my audience because I didn’t have total interest and engagement myself; so for this presentation I was sure to pick a video that I was interested in. For my video, I ended up choosing a TED talk given by a former professional skateboarder that I like named Rodney Mullen. The combination of being interested in this video and already knowing a bit of background information about Mullen really helped me stay engaged and put forth my best effort in writing my speech.

Although I gave my speech differently than my first presentation, I actually ended up preparing in the same way. Beforehand I wrote out an entire speech and read it pretty much line for line in my rehearsals, much like I did for our first presentations.

The reason why I think I did so well with this speech is because I was so engaged and well-versed in my material. When I got up to give my speech, I left my pre-written speech and my phone on my desk and fully committed to giving my speech from memory. While I recognize that my speech wasn’t outstanding, I am extremely proud of it because I proved to myself that I could speak publicly in front of an audience without reading from a script, something I thought I could never push myself to do. Now that I know I can give a speech from memory, next presentation I’ll tune up my content a bit.

Speaking Center Post for Project 2

For our second presentation, I took a trip to the basement of the library to meet with a public speaking coach at the speaking center. During my 30 minute meeting with Lauren, one of the highly qualified speaking coaches, we discussed ways to make my delivery stronger as well as how to organize a speech so that it is easier to remember. I thought this speaking center appointment was particularly interesting because I got more of a technical background about public speaking that we don’t touch on much in class.

Arrangement/Outline for Project 2

 

Structure for Presentation II

Introduction

  • Background of Rodney Mullen and skateboarding career
  • Information/short recap of the video I chose
  • How this video pertains to me

Paragraph 1 – Dissecting the evidence Mullen

    • Success through collaboration
    • Comparing Mullen’s “Personal Evidence” to Gore’s “Statistical Evidence”

 

  • Takeaway: Both kinds of evidence can be used to the same effect in their own respective contexts

 

Paragraph 2 – Further explanation of ‘Personal Evidence’

  • Why Mullen’s evidence worked in the context of his presentation
  • How Mullen’s visual evidence is substantial for his presentation

Paragraph 3 – How this pertains to bicycling

  • There is no direct connection
  • Making a connection through gaining inspiration
  • Takeaway: Gaining inspiration from the atmosphere you live in promotes great success

Closing

  • Reiteration of points
  • End with a quote *Food for thought

 

Individual conference post for project 2

Because I missed my individual conference during our first project, I thought it was important to schedule an appointment with Professor Hunt for our second project. This conference proved to be extremely helpful and got me set to prepare for our second presentation. In my conference I spent the majority of the time dissecting what I thought went wrong with my first presentation. With the help of Professor Hunt I was able to identify these problems clearly and formulate strategies to avoid the same issues in my second presentation.

Write-out for project 2

 

Hi my name is Matt and I’ll be assessing the evidence of a ted talk given by Rodney Mullen who is a former pro freestyle and street skateboarder originally from Gainesville, FL. Mullen was sponsored by Powell-Peralta skateboards throughout the early 80s and then switched to World Industries skateboards for the remainder of the 80s/ early 90s. Mullen is often referred to as the “Father of street skateboarding” because he invented many notable tricks such as the kickflip, heelflip, tre-flip and even the ollie. I chose Rodney Mullen for my evidence assessment because he is a personal hero of mine and also he has a very entertaining ted talk about his personal career as a skateboarder.

In the video I selected, the evidence that Mullen gives isn’t quite like the evidence found in other presentations we’ve watched. Because Mullen is talking about a topic as personal as his own professional career, his evidence is mostly based in examples of personal experience. An example of this would be when Mullen is talking about a sense of collaboration in his success. This is used as evidence through slides of people who influenced Mullen to become the skater he eventually would. While this evidence definitely adds validity to Mullen’s story, it might not be applicable as evidence in other forms. An example “hard” evidence that I like is a ted talk that Al Gore gave last winter on the optimism of climate change. I chose this video to show a contrast in the different kinds of evidence that can be used to the same effect during presentations. In Al Gore’s ted talk, he uses real, gathered evidence which both increases his credibility and makes for substantial evidence. While the differences between Gore and Mullen’s approaches to evidence are very different, they both use their evidence in the same way; to make their overall credibility extremely high.

Mullen’s use of evidence is substantial for his topic and his presentation. I think that a key in breaking down someone’s use of evidence is all in the context of the presentation. In Mullen’s case, his visual evidence is minimal which is always a plus for me in the context of a ted talk. As for the evidence itself, it directly pertains and backs up Mullen’s presentation. Mullen’s evidence easily could’ve taken a turn for the negative if the clips and photos he showed were getting off topic, but instead they are refined and much more effective. While Mullen’s evidence isn’t as impressive as statistics gathered by teams of scientists, it pertains to his story. Again touching on the context of Mullen’s evidence; while slides filled with numbers and statistics would make for more impressive evidence, the evidence Mullen chose to use is much more effective for his presentation.

How this pertains to bicycling; Unfortunately because Mullen’s ted talk contains no references to cycling or to bicycles in general, there is no way to closely tie together Mullen’s story to cycling. However, there is a way to tie the two together in a larger picture sense. In his talk Mullen praises the idea of progressing in a hobby through incorporating different influences and translating them to that hobby. For example, Rodney Mullen was one of the best “Freestyle” skateboarders at a very young age (14) but in just a few short years, Mullen became obsolete because the style of skateboarding had changed. Mullen was able to become one of the best “Street” skateboarders because he incorporated a freestyle aspect into his street skateboarding which was completely original at the time.

The main point that Mullen makes is that in order to succeed and progress in your success, you must be open to collaboration and intaking influence. This overarching point is such blanket advice that is highly applicable to most scenarios where you are trying to reach a goal. In terms of biking this could be training with a cycling contemporary to become a better cyclist, or looking at other cities’ bikeshare systems and bike path layout plans to gain inspiration before remodeling a new system for your own city. Thank you!

Discussion of Sources for Project 1

For our first project, I gave a speech that assessed the credibility of Jay Walder, CEO of Motivate bike share which recently partnered with Ford to produce the Ford Gobike initiative. In all honesty, I pretty much botched my presentation. I went into class feeling confident because when I recorded my three rehearsals they were consistently timed (4:50, 4:44, 4:54) and I was able to clearly articulate everything I wanted to say. One thing I think I was able to do particularly well in my rehearsals was that I was able to elaborate on bullet points and touch on everything I wanted to say while at the same time avoiding reading my script word for word. During my presentation though, I got nervous and lost my train of thought so I relied more on the script that I had written. A personal goal that I have for the semester is to be able to give my speeches the same way I rehearse.

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