September 21st: Blog writing in group: Narrative and descriptive writing

​​At a nursing facility in Barcelona, Spain, on June 22, 2020, Agustina Caamero, 81, gives her husband Pascual Pérez, 84, love and kisses through a plastic film screen to prevent them from getting the coronavirus. An embrace can elicit feelings of warmth and relief, love and dedication, even when encased in plastic. Agustina Caamero’s panic vanished as soon as she and her 84-year-old husband were able to embrace through a plastic film screen after being physically apart for 102 days due to Spain’s coronavirus outbreak.

https://www.pulitzer.org/winners/emilio-morenatti-associated-press

 

_F___ 1. Then I attended Morris Junior High. Junior high was a bad experience. I attended Morris Junior High; this was the junior high that was a bad experience. 

_F___ 2. The scene was filled with beauty. Such as the sun sending its brilliant rays to the earth and the leaves of various shades of red, yellow, and brown moving slowly in the wind. 

The scene was filled with beauty, such as the sun sending its brilliant rays to the earth. And the leaves of various shades of red, yellow, and brown moved slowly in the wind. 

__C__ 3. He talked for fifty minutes without taking his eyes off his notes. Like other teachers in that department, he did not encourage students’ questions.

_F___ 4. Within each group, a wide range of features to choose from. It was difficult to distinguish between them.

Each group has a wide range of features to choose from. As a result, it was difficult to distinguish between them. 

_C___ 5. A few less severe fellows would go into a bar for a steak dinner and a few glasses of beer. After this meal, they were ready for anything.

__C__ 6. It can be really embarrassing to be so emotion, really, but, especially when you are on your first date, you feel you should be in control.

____ 7. The magazine is renowned for a sophisticated, prestigious, and elite group of readers. Although that is a value judgment and, in the circumstances, not a true premise.

____ 8. In the seventh grade, every young boy goes out for football. To prove to himself and his parents that he is a man.

In the seventh grade, every young boy goes out for football to prove to himself and his parents that he is a man.

____ 9. She opened the door and let us into her home. Not realizing then that we would never enter that door in her home again.

She opened the door and let us into her home. Not realizing then that we would never enter that door in her home again.

____10. As Christmas grows near, I find myself looking back on my childhood days at fun-filled times of snowball fights. Thinking about this makes me happy.

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