After reading the comments for my rhetorical analysis essay, I saw that I could have created a better title and paragraph numbers in my APA citations. One thing that could have been improved in my writing is I could have used more examples when stating a claim. For future essays we write, I plan to make sure that I strictly follow the APA style rubric and include paragraph numbers if I’m using an article. I also plan on using a more effective writing style by having evidence for all the claims I state.