Group: Bry and Sabrina

Today I read Bry and Sabrina’s responses to the article. In their responses, they both introduced the story first and then went on to share their own personal experiences. We all shared personal experiences whether they were our own or of people we know. We also all agreed that the struggles of mixed people should be talked about more and better understood.

Essay two reflection:

After reading the comments from my essay I feel like I have a better understanding of how to improve my writing and make it stronger. One thing I definitely struggle with is making sure I set up my information correctly. For this essay, I needed to provide more information on my source and better explain how it was creditable. I also need to make sure that I practice more with APA formatting and get better at that. Overall I was really happy with the feedback I got and I think it will really help me make my writing better in the future.