my comments on my Essay: While your ideas are really captivating in this essay and are intriguing to read, this submission doesn’t fulfill the requirements of the assignment, which is about selecting an op-ed article or an editorial and doing a rhetorical analysis (please read the assignment prompt more carefully and see the evaluation criteria to help you complete the process step-wise).
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I just forgot to add the article to my writing but I did find an article.